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Old 06-12-2010, 01:49 AM   #16 (permalink)
Brandon Pomeroy
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Qw3rtyuu, the deadline for this contest ended May 13th, unfortunately. Remember to check dates before posting.

That being said, nice effect. You talked quietly compared to the buzz/white noise in the background, so although it was sometimes difficult to hear you, the effect was simple enough to follow. The following is constructive criticism, if you don't want any, stop reading here! I thought your movements were a little hesitant; it seemed like you were so afraid to flash that you made it look unnatural to compensate. For example, losing the prediction into the deck, then shaking it for over 3 seconds made everything seem less magical. Work on your sleights, smooth everything up, get a spectator to do it on, and you've got yourself a good routine right there.
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